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Precious

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You are like a jewel on a crown to me,
without you, its incomplete.
Without YOU,
I am like fish without fins or birds without wings.

corny, sappy, say what you want,
I am not doing this just for fun.
I want you to know just how much I feel,
Look into my eyes, feel my zeal.

Some say roses are red, violets are blue,
I say, they are both black and white, in a world without you.
Even as I close my eyes, I don't see darkness,
But an image of you lingers, it lingers...

Until I fully lose conscious, I see no more,
However there, is where the dreaming begins.
We are united and simply suited, as the ones in eleven.
The eleven minutes after the great chat we had,it feels like heaven.

The dream takes me on a journey, the one I long to have with you,
to see you laugh and enjoy yourself, away from the blues.
But I don't wish for it to last only in a mere dream.
You see dear girl...I need you and you need me, we are meant to be.
Don't deny it, don't pretend,
no more pride, no more pranks.

You are my precious treasure, of any or all splendour,
time waits for no man so please tell me, my tender flower.
Will you be my precious? make it all real?
Erase all problems and proclaim our seal.
This is a poem I made for those who wish to confess their love to the person they like and tell them how much they mean to them.

Time is always a factor that prevents relationship from being perfect.The usual problems of a relationship is either it starts too early or too late.Both are a problem.

Sometimes, certain things like multiple admirers, studies, work and sports(Too frequent) can also chew at or prevent real love from happening.

Time is not there for you always, you will never know when you will ever have the chance..so if you are sure of it, go for it, don't look back,
Make it successful, once you get it, you will know if its true love, for true love is a sensation unsurpassed and cannot be denied.
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u are extremely passionate ur workds are like shakespear with a lot of power and meaning well done!