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   Your sweet voice, your sweet smile,
   Its all gone now.
   Your attention, your sensation,
   Its all gone now.

   So why does it end like this,
   No story foretold such a miss.
   Always thought success was present
   but utterly, in a different fashion.

   For not great in feeling the love and the truth
   but deceived in the myth of assumptions and pride.

   You see a fairytale in front of your eyes but all there is are lies.
   There never was a road to paradise for you two,
   just a fake path, you paved for yourself and your shadow.

   The shadow you thought was the person you loved but all it was,
   all it will ever be,
   Is an unfulfilled fantasy.
©2007-2009 ~CupidKiller
:iconcupidkiller:

Author's Comments

''Forlorn'' is a poem I dedicate to the hapless chaps out there who seem to know their relationship is going smoothly with the girl they love but however, they are stuck in a single dimension.

Ultimately, sucked into oblivion with their sanity for a brief moment by reality when they realise, their partner isn't what they thought her out to be.This is one form of imperfect love, another bad job by cupid..simply called, unreplied love.

*This could also be applied the other way round in gender (eg.girl ovverates relation with boy) however, slimmer chance.

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:iconunworshipped-deity:
Idealizing the partner has proved to be disastrous. Lest the lover helps the other to better himself/herself.. tough job again..

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dog eat dog | god eat god | deity eat deity
:iconwhite0demon:
it's nice ^^ i've felt like that..

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:blackrose: !!smile, life is simple!! :blackrose:
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:love:
How do you do that?
:icontigerbyheart:
wow you could be a song writer or a professional poet

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"How'd you get up there?"
"I fell."

Yeah...I'm just that awesome :P

Your all bastard coated bastards with bastard filling. :|

RULE BRITANNIA!!!!!
:iconmiumiu17:
its really good as usual life is a mystery well done genius
:iconalexwannabe:
Its a good poem..luckily it doens't apply to my current relationship, but it DOES to my past ones...

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Make time, because you'll never find it.
:iconforgeaus:
I like the message in this one, its clear, and cuts through the maya (sanscrit for illusion)...

Perhaps because I wrap myself up in escapisms and fantasy is why seeing things for what they are comes so easily to me...

heres hoping the future holds better things...

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