Your sweet voice, your sweet smile,
Its all gone now.
Your attention, your sensation,
Its all gone now.
So why does it end like this,
No story foretold such a miss.
Always thought success was present
but utterly, in a different fashion.
For not great in feeling the love and the truth
but deceived in the myth of assumptions and pride.
You see a fairytale in front of your eyes but all there is are lies.
There never was a road to paradise for you two,
just a fake path, you paved for yourself and your shadow.
The shadow you thought was the person you loved but all it was,
all it will ever be,
Is an unfulfilled fantasy.
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''Forlorn'' is a poem I dedicate to the hapless chaps out there who seem to know their relationship is going smoothly with the girl they love but however, they are stuck in a single dimension.
Ultimately, sucked into oblivion with their sanity for a brief moment by reality when they realise, their partner isn't what they thought her out to be.This is one form of imperfect love, another bad job by cupid..simply called, unreplied love. *This could also be applied the other way round in gender (eg.girl ovverates relation with boy) however, slimmer chance. |
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dog eat dog | god eat god | deity eat deity
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How do you do that?
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"How'd you get up there?"
"I fell."
Yeah...I'm just that awesome
Your all bastard coated bastards with bastard filling.
RULE BRITANNIA!!!!!
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Make time, because you'll never find it.
Perhaps because I wrap myself up in escapisms and fantasy is why seeing things for what they are comes so easily to me...
heres hoping the future holds better things...
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